Dear Journal,
Well, today is my first day moving to The Enclave and it is absolutely beautiful here! This place is nothing like how it is back on Earth. Everyone was really nice and friendly moving me into my new house. Storm was right when she said The Enclave was based on the word "kindness." I got assigned the "A" schedule just like Storm and we work in the same department! After work, I got introduced to Storm's friend named Naz'Timari and she's a really good person to get along with. I also found out that she doesn't live that far from me and we have a lot in common. I'm looking forward to tomorrow to see Storm at work.
Dear Journal,
I finally finished moving all of my stuff into my house by the help of Storm and Naz'Timari. We all head to work in the morning, but Naz'Timari doesn't work in the same department as Storm and I do. Storm introduced me to all of the other workers and our manager. The Enclave is nothing like Earth. Everyone accpets your flaws and they don't judge you at all. It feels good to get along with everyone and I feel stress free. Storm and Naz'Timari are coming over later on to help me decorate my house. I'm so glad that it came pre-furnished.
Dear Journal,
Today is day three of living on The Enclave and I just love every minute of it. Storm and Naz'Timari came over and helped me pick out the color of my room. We all agreed that Red would be the best choice since that's my favorite color. After we went out to eat at this restaurant called Olive Garden, just like the one back on Earth, but better. I learned that Naz'Timari was born in The Enclave and I got to learn more about the place. Storm and I told her how it was like living on Earth and she had a hard time believing me when I told her I used to get builled. She told me how she could never imagine life being builled. She also never even heard of the word mean before!
Thursday, March 14, 2013
Daily Itinerary: Zachary Stancliffe
Every person has a basic schedule. Each person will work an A,B, or C shift. A shift is the morning shift from 7:00 a.m. to 12:00 p.m. everyone then gets lunch. B shift starts at 1:00 a.m. and goes to 5:00 pm. Then everyone will eat dinner. After dinner C shift will go to work from 6:00 p.m. to 11:00 p.m. then it's bed time. During someone’s off shift they will be able to do whatever they want, from random activities like sports to just hanging out with friends. School will work on the same schedule, students will be assigned to an A, B, or C school.
Every person has a basic schedule. Each person will work an A,B, or C shift. A shift is the morning shift from 7:00 a.m. to 12:00 p.m. everyone then gets lunch. B shift starts at 1:00 a.m. and goes to 5:00 pm. Then everyone will eat dinner. After dinner C shift will go to work from 6:00 p.m. to 11:00 p.m. then it's bed time. During someone’s off shift they will be able to do whatever they want, from random activities like sports to just hanging out with friends. School will work on the same schedule, students will be assigned to an A, B, or C school.
Government: Zachary Stancliffe
The Enclave will rule as government over the entire solar system, all planets must comply to Enclave laws. However, Planetary leaders also have the right to make the laws for the planets that they have control over. The government will work as thus. Each planet will divided into districts. Each district will have a representative in their planetary council. Every single person no matter age or race will vote on the representative they want. Any non criminal citizen may run for office. Every planetary council will elect an Enclave member every 2 years. The citizens must do a vote of approval for the the enclave member of their planet. The Enclave will then elect Jobs for each Enclave member based on their skills. The Enclave will elect the following:
-A General of the army (controls the army)
-A General's adviser (Will take over in the death or absence of the General)
-An Admiral of the navy (controls the navy)
-An Admiral's advisory (Will take over in the death or absence of the Admiral)
-Defensive coordinator (control over the planetary defense grid)
-Minister of logistics(Focuses solely on making sure the Enclave stays in budget and decides what to do for taxes and revenue)
-Treasurer (Works with the minister of logistic to keep the Enclave in budget and working smoothly)
-Head Judge(Head of all of the courts in the the Enclave. Major cases will work their way from a district court to a planetary to the Enclave court. All members of the enclave participate in the court. however, the head judge gets the final say in the case and will select punishment.)
-Legislation(lawmakers)
-President (control over the Enclave, gets final say in laws and can overrule the head judge in court cases. He also has a say in war and defense. Also he can decide where the budget will go)
-Vice President (Presidents second in command. Works with the president to make decisions. Takes over in the absence or death of the president.)
-Presidential adviser (advises the President and Vice on decisions that they make.)
(If the President is corrupt or goes mad with power, the presidential adviser and the vice president can veto he’s decisions. but only if they agree on it.)
Schooling:
School will happen in three shifts and A, B, and C shift. A shift is the morning shift from 7:00 a.m. to 12:00 p.m. everyone then gets lunch. B shift starts at 1:00 a.m. and goes to 5:00 pm. Then everyone will eat dinner. After dinner C shift will go to work from 6:00 p.m. to 11:00 p.m. then it's bed time. This will happen for two thirds of a year then they will get the third off for a break. Students will go through 9 years of schooling; kindergarten through 8th grade. When they graduate from middle school they will take their G.O.A.T. test. this will decide the job best suited for them. (If a citizen absolutely hates the job they received they can out in a request for the job that they would like) Once a Student has their job they will go to a year long school where they will learn all about the job they have and how to do said job. From their they will work on an A,B, or C schedule just like their schooling.
The Enclave Propaganda and motto
The Enclave
Keep calm and Sentinel on.
Join us it will be the like life gave you a second chance. You will make the best decision you have ever made in life.
Rules: Zachary Stancliffe
Military:
-The Enclave will be heavily military based. However, military service will not be required.
-The Enclave’s military power is solely for defense and protection.
-A large Military will ensure the safety and comfort of the citizens and hopefully make them less scared of an attack.
-The Enclave will never launch a first strike attack.
-The Enclave will respond to any attack or threat with the appropriate force and tact.
Citizens:
-All citizens have a say in laws and decisions .
-Every Citizen votes on the laws of their planet and the laws of the Enclave.
-Every Citizen will take a Goal Orientated Aptitude Test or G.O.A.T. Test to decided the job that they will have, If they are severely unhappy with the job they receive arrangements will be made to help give them the job that they want.
-Criminals will be punished to the full extent of the law
-The military will have an acting branch as police
-Families with active members in the military will be rewarded
-No tolerance laws
-No bullying, counts as a criminal offense
Military:
-The Enclave will be heavily military based. However, military service will not be required.
-The Enclave’s military power is solely for defense and protection.
-A large Military will ensure the safety and comfort of the citizens and hopefully make them less scared of an attack.
-The Enclave will never launch a first strike attack.
-The Enclave will respond to any attack or threat with the appropriate force and tact.
Citizens:
-All citizens have a say in laws and decisions .
-Every Citizen votes on the laws of their planet and the laws of the Enclave.
-Every Citizen will take a Goal Orientated Aptitude Test or G.O.A.T. Test to decided the job that they will have, If they are severely unhappy with the job they receive arrangements will be made to help give them the job that they want.
-Criminals will be punished to the full extent of the law
-The military will have an acting branch as police
-Families with active members in the military will be rewarded
-No tolerance laws
-No bullying, counts as a criminal offense
Declaration of Independence:By Zachary Stancliffe
We the people of the Enclave hereby declare our independence and self sustenance from the tyranny and the corruption of governments past. The Government is supposed to protect its citizens and uphold the law at the same time. The citizens are the sole purpose of a governing body and thus are the key part to a successful government. The people have a voice and it should be heard to the fullest. The Enclave ensures that the citizens have the say in who will lead them. Anyone may run for office no matter age of race as long as they are not convicted criminals. Everyone is equal, everyone one is free, we are the Enclave.
We the people of the Enclave hereby declare our independence and self sustenance from the tyranny and the corruption of governments past. The Government is supposed to protect its citizens and uphold the law at the same time. The citizens are the sole purpose of a governing body and thus are the key part to a successful government. The people have a voice and it should be heard to the fullest. The Enclave ensures that the citizens have the say in who will lead them. Anyone may run for office no matter age of race as long as they are not convicted criminals. Everyone is equal, everyone one is free, we are the Enclave.
Wednesday, March 13, 2013
The Enclave Persuavise letter
Still not convinced yet? Still living on Earth? Well, our good ciztizen Donnie isn't. Donnie is an American that used to live on Earth until one day his good friend Storm sent him a letter that made him move instantly! Storm came to us and told us how she convinced someone to move to our Utopia. Here's the letter:
Dear Donnie,
I know it's been a long time since I talked to you, but I no longer live on Earth anymore! I don't understand how you could put up with how society has been and is still treating you! I know growing up as a child, you've been builled, but at The Enclave, bullying isn't permitted! The Enclave is based on the word "kindness" and everyone is nice to each other! The also offer free houses to their citizens just for living there.They give out diamonds too! Basically, everyone in The Enclave is rich and nobody has to experience what it feels like to be homeless. When you move there, you get assigned either an A, B, or C schedule. The A shift (if you have a job), runs in the morning, the B schedule runs in the afternoon, and the C schedule runs in the night. Each shift is five hours long. Students also get an A, B, or C schedule because school runs on its own schedule. The A schedule starts at 7:00 AM and ends at 12:00 PM, the B schedule runs from 1:00 PM, to 6:00 PM , and the C schedule runs from 7:00 PM and ends at 12:00 AM. Once you've finished your A, B, or C schedule you're free to do whatever you want. I was assigned the A schedule, so when I'm done with work, I go to the mall or usually hang out with my friend named Naz'Timari. You don't haev to worry about being someone you're not or trying to fit in. Everyone accepts you for who you are, so come on down here! Don't you want a change in life where everything is just perfect? I want you to think about it!
From,
Storm Pizzaro
Dear Donnie,
I know it's been a long time since I talked to you, but I no longer live on Earth anymore! I don't understand how you could put up with how society has been and is still treating you! I know growing up as a child, you've been builled, but at The Enclave, bullying isn't permitted! The Enclave is based on the word "kindness" and everyone is nice to each other! The also offer free houses to their citizens just for living there.They give out diamonds too! Basically, everyone in The Enclave is rich and nobody has to experience what it feels like to be homeless. When you move there, you get assigned either an A, B, or C schedule. The A shift (if you have a job), runs in the morning, the B schedule runs in the afternoon, and the C schedule runs in the night. Each shift is five hours long. Students also get an A, B, or C schedule because school runs on its own schedule. The A schedule starts at 7:00 AM and ends at 12:00 PM, the B schedule runs from 1:00 PM, to 6:00 PM , and the C schedule runs from 7:00 PM and ends at 12:00 AM. Once you've finished your A, B, or C schedule you're free to do whatever you want. I was assigned the A schedule, so when I'm done with work, I go to the mall or usually hang out with my friend named Naz'Timari. You don't haev to worry about being someone you're not or trying to fit in. Everyone accepts you for who you are, so come on down here! Don't you want a change in life where everything is just perfect? I want you to think about it!
From,
Storm Pizzaro
Subscribe to:
Posts (Atom)